small mistake

we believe
comfort
is our friend

we rent
this space between us
which works

to teach us
we like our sleep
rougher

::

Twiglet #31

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7 thoughts on “small mistake

    1. Thanks Misky. We can either pay an extra $300 to have our own rooms on vacation…or suck it up and sleep with the snorers:) ha, i have my leanings, as the poem suggests, but nothing has been decided yet.

  1. Agreed, very subtle with a lot going on. Nice. I really like “we rent this space between us”. Though provoking, as Missy said.

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