Magnolia

Big and bold

She enters the room ~

Magnolia

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http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com/2014/04/carpe-diem-458-magnolia.html

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22 thoughts on “Magnolia

      1. Good day Angie, I have re-done your Magnolia-haiku, but I am not that happy with it right now. So I have published your haiku and my re-done one on the Carpe Diem Haiku Kai Forum. (http://carpediemhaikukaiforum.blogspot.com) Maybe there are other haiku-family members who have ideas about it.

        My re-done version is this one:

        big buds explode
        sweet perfume of Magnolia
        enters the room

        What do you think?

      2. I have re-read and re-read this re-done version and I have tried your suggestion, but “explode” makes the scene stronger … so after a thousand times saying this haiku (as Basho once said 🙂 ) I have decided to stay with explode.

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