Stars

 Things no one understands:

the blue tip of a flame, a foreign language

embroidered on a tongue, a vortex, a belly button,

an unborn babe sucking its thumb, a beauty

too complex. Same with words

that come to mind,

those winking

stars.

 

Inspired by the first Gargleblaster Writing Challenge [42 words] at YeahWrite: What’s so amazing that keeps us stargazing?

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24 thoughts on “Stars

    1. Thanks Natalie! I have another real image I’m putting up from a photographer friend of mine that I’m just as excited about on my blog. Little ditty I’ll attach is not as dreamy as the photo. Come by and look.

    1. Thank you for that, Christi. It ended up looking like a diamond (visually). Ironic how the more you rub a piece of coal, it turns into a diamond too. Poems are lumps. Gotta love the process.

  1. Oh, nice! I loved “a beauty too complex.” This is such a thoughtful piece. So nice to have you gargleblasting along with us, Angie!

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