And What About Bob

and what about Bob
etherized on the
kitchen floor

adulterous bottle
spilling
over linoleum

against his volition
against his quivering
liver

Bob leaves
the undertaker
to siphon

our marriage
through one
main artery

[Exactly 33 of your own words about love gone wrong without using: love/sad/tears/wept/heart/pain. Gotta ❤️Trifecta’s timing with Valentine’s Day!]
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25 thoughts on “And What About Bob

  1. I echo all the praise for siphoning. Happy to know I’m not the only one combing the thesaurus for these entries. Loved your piece.

    1. Momo, I’ve loved my thesaurus for decades! Thanks for the praise for my depressing take on What About Bob. I was caught up by your ‘adrift’ in your entry. So, I guess you could say, I caught your adrift. Puny pun…I know.

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