Rivulet

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spring mountain ribbon
my fingers want to touch it ~
ringlet of her hair

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2 thoughts on “Rivulet

  1. Wow Angie. I have to say, this is the best of what haiku can be in English, IMHO. Using the 5-7-5 form but so beautifully blending the sonic qualities of the English language. The -ng’s, the S’s, the R’s the T’s and the way they all play off each other. Fantastic. Sonically sonorous.

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