Morning Shimmer

Creating a Tan Renga, is to spring-board from someone else’s haiku with a new two-lined ending of fourteen syllables (7/7). Here’s my finish to Bjorn Rudberg’s beginning:

morning shimmer
dew frosting on furze
a single leaf falls

she cheats color into cheeks
paints sparkle over creases

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